Fix these sentences:
1. she claims she was playing Frisbee with her Friends at the park when the flying dog of doom assaulted her out of no were. The police and paramedics believe the dog was attracted to the blue of her jacket and was enraged by it.
2. Today I finished my News Report , that i did on Thursday. But now im workin on this.
3. It didnt change my mind but I think of high school better.
4. I did not watch the hole movie.
5. I do not like to read books or paragraph.
6. Actually I found the movie very entertaining cause I understanded all of it.
7. I think theyre targeting people who would thing what it is like to be hang over and people who loves comedy.
8. Pilot ejected him from a Southwest Airlines flight from Oakland to Burbank, California, saying he didn't fit properly in a single seat.
9. I write good enough that you can read it with perfectly grammer.
10. I dont write that much but im prety confident about my ability.
11. The reason why I think Mrs. Martin and Mr. Pierce chose this film because it show us that anyone can write.
12. Yes because its show that anyone can do what they want if they try and different ethnic groups can be friends with each other.
13. I did start it Thursday afternoon , but then I ran outof time. so just a few minutes ago I just finished it.
14. I hope I have a better english experience using the computers.
15. The movie I enjoy most is The Hang Over it was histarical.
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Hmmnnn... Good start... you caught a few errors... but there are more...
ReplyDeleteThe good news is that you can go back and catch the errors you missed.
Remember, EVERY sentence needs to start with a capital. EVERY time you use 'I' to refer to yourself it needs to be a capital letter.
Have you got your suit picked out for Friday yet?
Tyler it is very important that you correct the reamining errors in this activity. This is one of the assignments that we are marking, please try to get this done as soon as possible.
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